In these images, I see an individual caught sleeping. I definitely see uniformity to the images with naturally lit environments and non-posed images. In a couple of the images, I also see an underlying theme of something unfinished, or halves. With the images of the hand and bread, as well as the image that highlights the subjects shoes, I think that the use of these images in your final project will benefit the overall product as well as give the viewer something to latch onto and carry throughout the series. As often as I see the subject sleeping, I’d like to see the subject awake in at least one of your final images, preferably and visibly aware of the camera and the photographer. With continued development of these images, as well as attention to cropping and composition, I believe the narrative you intend to display will be successful.
Critique for Sarah Nagorski
ReplyDeleteIn these images, I see an individual caught sleeping. I definitely see uniformity to the images with naturally lit environments and non-posed images. In a couple of the images, I also see an underlying theme of something unfinished, or halves. With the images of the hand and bread, as well as the image that highlights the subjects shoes, I think that the use of these images in your final project will benefit the overall product as well as give the viewer something to latch onto and carry throughout the series. As often as I see the subject sleeping, I’d like to see the subject awake in at least one of your final images, preferably and visibly aware of the camera and the photographer. With continued development of these images, as well as attention to cropping and composition, I believe the narrative you intend to display will be successful.